Unbounded….

“Amy get up its seven”said her mom.
just 5 minutes more”….I am so tired”cried Amy cuddling underneath her pillow.
Few minutes later….
Mom….where is dad?….”he is busy on some new murder case said mom.(amy ‘s dad is an senior CBI officer)….”wow new case huh…amy mode investigator on….”cried Amy happily…
“Come Amy I’ll drop u in school ” said her dad….
As Amy play in her dads iPhone.in her dads car…it rings third time and Amy is caught….red handed
“Amy how much times should I tell you not to take my phone?”asked her dad..  As he speaks on phone his face turns serious….he parks the car near a large grand building….”Amy sit in car don’t come out I will be back in a minute”.
But amy’s inquisitiveness took hold of her…..Amy looks too small for a 17 year old..and her maturity equals a 10 year old….
She jumps out of the car stating a minute is already over….
The house is crowded with cops…Amy has never visited a crime scene before….adrenaline rushed through her veins….she walked in through the corridor….the place is cold marked in red…forbidden….some sort of inquisitiveness took hold of her….she walked into the room the smell of blood increased with every step…..there in middle of the room lies a lady….the most beautiful one Amy has ever seen in her life…..so fragile…..but there were brutal cuts all over her…the lady looked bewildered cold and frozen….in death….
But as Amy looked closer…the lady looked at her….beautiful eyes peered into her…Amy stepped back….her heart stopped still…fear flooding her vein…..a cold hand gripped her shoulder….

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7 Comments Add yours

  1. Nitin says:

    your imagination is wild, let it not be tamed, ever. 🙂

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  2. “As Amy play in her dads iPhone.in her dads car…it rings third time and Amy is caught….red handed
    “Amy how much times should I tell you not to take my phone?”asked her dad.. As he speaks on phone his face turns serious….he parks the car near a large grand building….”Amy sit in car don’t come out I will be back in a minute”.

    My comment: I am not very good at this but I felt your tense changed here to the present. Earlier you had used past tense. There needs to be consistence.

    Interesting story bytheway. Makes one wonder where you’re headed with it. Keep writing 🙂

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      thanks for your patience to read it….I was too lazy to proof read it….sorry for the mistake…and thanks for the correction I have corrected it….do read its other part…and tell me if there is any mistake dear..

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  3. dhirajanand says:

    Wow!

    Liked by 1 person

      1. dhirajanand says:

        🙂

        Like

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