What is she??
A nymph or a fairy…
or a maiden of darkest sorcery ,
who allured me with her enchanting witchery…
those watery blue eyes..
that spellbinding looks..
make me skim in a dream…
as I lay bewitched in her captivating charm..
Oh gracious heaven,
Is she a princess
of some heavenly land…
or perhaps from Atlantis.
what is that ?
in her ravishing looks..
that makes me astray//
persuading me to crave
to be her prince
by her side I feel
more like a frog prince..
her golden curls….
which carelessly decends down
her fair shoulders….
crushed my fragile heart…
Is she a human,,,
or perhaps a celestial being..
never have I in my petite life
come across such profound elegance
she walks by me..
sits by my side.
I pester up courage…
but my voice did fail…
I asked her…
Will you be my queen,
and rule over my heart,
will you provide me the honor
to be yours,
she gave me a blank stare….
slowly her divine voice
erupted from her throat…
that sounded
Sorry I am
already the Queen
of an other heart.
dont be sad you will
surely find a better bride
than me….
I would be glad if you meet my King…
……
I walk away
cursing under my breath
she is no princess
must be a stupid bitch.
or treacherous witch
in a disguise….
-anagha.M
That escalated quickly :’)
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he…he….thanks for reading and the comment dear..
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I believe the line “you will find better one” hit his nerve 😦
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he..he…….it would almost anyone’s….especially when you dream so much….and everything shatters in a second…
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True.. Dream got shattered when she told he has King but she stomped, even on his shattered pieces of dream by saying that line :’)
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he..he….yes….girls do that often tell that line…when they spurn someone….its a universal line…
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Haha. Internet., Truth is out. Beware. Proceed with caution :p
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may be…I am a girl too….
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Enjoyed it, beautiful presentation of both, praise and curse.
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he…he thankyou
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beautiful poem
Enviado desde mi iPhone
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thank you dear…..your comment means a lot
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with much love respect and admiration
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that is really sweet of you…..
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Thank you, well making words
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Wow! You are soo subtle and enriched as a writer…alot to learn from you 👍 :))
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your comment makes me fly……….thank you dear….you made my day…
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Its rejuvenating to fly at times 😀 and as a person you’re soo grounded that you’ll always know where to land :))
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really…….hey dear…I am totally out of words to thank you….you are really sweet..
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Always :))
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Wow! The way you’ve described, it’s amazing. I was constantly looking at that picture after reading each lines. 🙂
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thank you so much for stopping by and patience…..hehe…I wrote this poem seeing that picture…
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Beautiful 🙂
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thank you….that is really nice of you
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Haha.. What an ending… 😀
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I hope you liked it…
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Yes, I did. I love the force in your words. It is always pushing forward, unveiling story. It is a very good thing. 🙂
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your words induce me to write more (…you are one of my fav writer after Rowling and Austen..etc…..and now Nitin…..)your words of appreciation from you means a lot….
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Hehe.. Rowling and Austen! You are the sweetest to say that 🙂 this is the closest I would come to being mentioned in the same line with Rowling and Austen 😛 🙂
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oh…dear you write so well…I havent seen anyone who can portray feelings more wonderful than you do…
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I think I’m learning from you guys. Thank you Anagha for motivating me 🙂
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from me…you gotta be kidding…anyway…i love motivating you….if you get motivated you will write such wonderful posts that I really love…..
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Yes, we usually don’t realize many things about ourselves. thanks for being supportive 🙂
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no need to thank your sis,,,,
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🙂
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Hi there. I laughed at the end. I didn’t expect her reaction. It added a twist, a surprise, always good. I enjoyed the poem. 🙂
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thank you dear….
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Really enjoyed reading this.Awesome !! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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thank you dear..thanks a lot for your time ….patience…and comment
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You are welcome. It was a pleasure 🙂 you have a nice blog 🙂 and thank you so much for visiting mine 😀
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Hi, sunshine! Thank You for stopping by my blog and following! Here’s an imaginary cookie for ya. Have a great day/night! ❤
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oh….thanks
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Awwww lovely its like my World .. Where we are happy almost all the time .. Lovely 🙂
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thank you…
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