unbounded

Image result for love snowIt must be spring now ,but it is too cold for spring,the air rustled the leaves as it descended down fluttering carelessly settling on my shoulder .I stared at the deserted park the winter prevailed ,the snow outlining branches of the trees as the nature glistens in the canopy of snow. The intricate patterns of ice form on the strands of my hair which I slowly whisk awayΒ  resuming my daydreams of my Amy.

I loiter through the shoveled path in the park but snow has already made a thin layer which etched my footsteps but soon vanished as it snowed harder.but I wish her footsteps were accompanying mine.

I can see her approaching me.She still looks like a tiny girl from school with those little freckles which appeared when she smile.she glanced at me with those largeΒ  black eyes,which hid beneath those long dainty lashes.Her flawless skin which resembled the softest flower.Her lips the palest of pink which shone through the white contrast of winter.I smiled at her as she moved towards me ,the little fringes of her hair that swayed with the wind reminded me of daffodils.I know it is an imbecile comparison but she is my flower,my treasure.

she looked at me”why did you call me?”

I felt gormless for now I realized I was staring at her all along .I loved and respected her not just for her looks but for the person she is.

“Can we sit and speak?”I asked.

“surely “she replied.

we sat on a empty seat I look down unable to face her.I didnt know how to start.

I wished to inch closer to her but my courage failed.

I glanced at her she was radiating ,for there has always been a aura of beauty around her.

It was most obsolete movement of my life.

“Amy,I know this is not gonna be easy,I know I have been absurd all along,I must have accepted it far back that I loved you,but Amy now I am asking you something I have craved to ask you all my life,Do you still love me?,will you be my life,will you be my wife?”

silence prevailed…Image result for snow love

she didnt face me she looked down.I felt a pang in my heart is she gonna spurn me?I confronted an colossal effect of anticipation gnawing me.

but I continued….

“Amy,I loved you every second of my life,my life well its all yours now .I ruined myself striving to keep a distance from you.love,I loved you every breath of my life since the day our eyes met,Amy ,my love today I am pleading you to be my queen,to be my mistress,I swear I will be by you forever ,please Amy tell me what you feel,either it is positive or negative”.

I can feel my heart rip apart when I uttered the word negative because my heart urged for her love….Image result for love snow

she remained silent two drops of tears glided down her large eyes tripping on the snow.

I waited for an hour .I slowly croaked,for I lost my voice in grief.I didnt wish to cry not at least in front of her but I cant hold back my tears any further.

I knew the answer was negative.

“Amy,I am sorry ,I have hurt you ,I have always been the reason of your tears,may be I am not the perfect guy for you”

I walked away with a heaving heart.I still love her and forever will.

“hey”she called out with tears outlining her eyes.

“how dare you leave me? ,I waited seven years just to hear these words and now your walking away so leisurely”she bellowed.

next second she was on me.yeah even I expected a kiss but instead she hit me hard giving me a black eye.

“so what is your answer”I asked smiling.

“positive”she said……

my heart jumped in glee.

“but”she said.

my heart stopped

she whispered in my ear “I love you,you may be imperfect,but your imperfections makes you perfect for me”.

“will our wedding bells ring”I asked…

“I wish “she replied

 

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  1. Mahesh Mali says:

    Hey Anagha , whose narration I just read ? sorry I didn’t get idea… who he was ??

    So , is this ‘the end’
    SPLENDIDπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      not end just a part somewhere from middle………and this is narrated by amy’s true love

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      1. Mahesh Mali says:

        Oh come on … can’t you tell his name πŸ˜‚ #JustCurious

        But , it’s okay … I know … you love keeping suspense 😝

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      2. anaghamurali says:

        yes….I will tell his name….siddarth…and now u will be more confused..for you already know him

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      3. Mahesh Mali says:

        Oh yea .. I’m totally confused πŸ˜›
        whatever … the post was awesome .. love the way you have written … and as always … waiting for next post .. as you said this is not the end πŸ˜‹

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      4. anaghamurali says:

        thank you dear….I will soon write it

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  2. Brining the climax in early or was she dreaming ? Good one πŸ™‚

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      not dreaming I just wrote a part from the middle of the story just simply because I was fond of this incident.end is something unexpected from which the story sprung

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      1. Haha. Ok. I thought you were gonna bring the surprise of harsh reality. Just like George RR Martin πŸ˜€

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      2. anaghamurali says:

        no not like that…hehe thanks for reading….the ending is happily ever after..I assure …but my sister kicked me when I narrated her the climax

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      3. I think I can think of one such scenario but not gonna say and spoil it πŸ˜€

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      4. anaghamurali says:

        just tell it out…

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      5. Not in open especially when many following this.. No plans of getting kicked by fellow bloggers :p

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      6. anaghamurali says:

        I cant kick u through the screen..I dont think anyone else can

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      7. You can’t. But yu love the idea right. πŸ˜€ Btw what if it was the intended climax and I ruin it for the readers. 😐

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      8. anaghamurali says:

        lets see anyway…

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      9. Ok. My assumption is that she isnt gonna marry this person. πŸ™‚

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      10. anaghamurali says:

        simply wrong….

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      11. This is just like schrodinger’s cat paradox. :p

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      12. anaghamurali says:

        he..he….that was an easy assumption….due you think I will separate my amy and her love….I like them so much.but still I get kicked

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      13. Well.. to be precise “Her LoverS” She has various option to choose from :p My Lord.. I shall.. rest my case here. :p

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      14. anaghamurali says:

        she has loved just 1 guy….you will know towards the end who and why

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      15. Ok. Let’s see. πŸ™‚

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      16. anaghamurali says:

        hmm…gud nyt

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      17. Have a great evening :p

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  3. ssunshine14 says:

    πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      thank you dear…

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      1. ssunshine14 says:

        πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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  4. bhaatdal says:

    Very well done ..

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  5. hey… nice article. ‘perfectly imperfect’?

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      thank you dear….he,..he yes perfectly imperfect guy.

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      1. perfect imperfection is really beautiful. cheers!

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      2. anaghamurali says:

        thank you..who wants a bossy perfect guy….certain lovely imperfections in people make them perfect for us.

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  6. Pratyusha says:

    Bugsieeee baby!!!! I loved it ….u write really well πŸ™‚ muahhh

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      thank you sissssy

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  7. Pratyusha says:

    You are welcome muahhh

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  8. Antra says:

    Absolutely beautiful….loved it β™‘πŸ‘

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  9. Nitin says:

    This made the things intriguing πŸ˜€

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      thank you really glad you liked it

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      1. Nitin says:

        welcome, as always πŸ™‚

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  10. as your sister…i certainly didn’t like the end…the guy really was a moron…he waited to tell her for 10 stupid years…like…

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      well this is not the end….I narrated her the climax of unbounded series…there is no way denying that he is a moron…but a cute moron

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      1. Yeah..you’re naturally talented…you even made moron cute. That’s so nice of you

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      2. anaghamurali says:

        Thank you……that is very sweet of you dear

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