valentines day present…..

early hours of dawn,

sun beams tickling the dark draw on,

snoring underneath my cot,

I lie dreaming a lot.


As my vibrating phone calls,

my splendid slumber drawls….

hearing some knock on my window,

I pace away from my pillow…..


cursing my cat I glance,

through the glass,

my heart skips a beat,

As I see him greet….


rushing to the window ,

smiling and crying alike,

“What the hell ?” I ask….

bewildered and scared I am…


“happy Valentines day baby”he says

my love stands there by my window sill

with bouquet of rose, a card..

and a gift I long asked for..


he is handsome as hell,

making me gasp as I tell,

but I look like a mess,

I didn’t brush my hair and in my night dress.


“I love u…u look good “he tells,

making me go white as if in his spell,

“love you “I cry,

smiling between my tears…


Rattling noises I hear ….

mommy and dads awake,

I ask him to leave ,

my stupid guy he glance,,,,


“love you “he whispers,

jumping over fence he disappears,

I sit there,staring into dark…

with a heart fluttering stark…


I read the card smiling like crazy,

recollecting the ways he,

made me happy….

and my heart bellows,

thats my boy,he belongs to me,

my guy my valentine….







37 Comments Add yours

  1. Aww… That’s a sweet story through beautiful words! Good work!โ˜บ๏ธ

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      thank you dear…..

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  2. Penelope says:

    Very, very sweet!

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  3. Mils says:

    That brought a smile to my face and a tear to my eye. Thank you. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      oh…my I am so happy to hear you words….thank you so much..

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  4. randyjw says:

    This is so nice, Anagha. It makes you clearly picture the whole scene in your mind, so, of course, I could replay that nice thought again. That’s a wonderful scene. Thanks.

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  5. angela1313 says:

    What a lovely way to tell the story. I enjoyed it very much.


  6. Indira says:

    A dreamy scene drawn with words…!

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      yeah…a bit dreamy


  7. love in the air…nice poem…cheers

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  8. I wait to read a book from Anagha. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      Thank you my dearest one….love u loads

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      1. Love you too. ๐Ÿ˜ Your writings always mesmerise me. Please do share me the links via whatsapp. I can’t afford to miss anyone of them. โ˜บโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜

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      2. anaghamurali says:

        you made my day Shreya darling…I will send you ….your writings has never forgot to take me to a magical wonderland…

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      3. I’m happy. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’‹โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ

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  9. TalkaholicMe says:

    Beautifully written

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  10. Ananya says:

    Very nice!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜


  11. Grandtrines says:

    Reblogged this on Orthometry.


  12. amreeezy says:

    This was a sweet read after doing my Vday blog! Thanks for the inspiration!

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    1. anaghamurali says:

      Thanks a lot dear meggan

      Liked by 1 person

  13. mick25117 says:

    Great poem!! Great emotion and relatable

    Liked by 1 person

  14. probableman says:

    All I get is coffee for Valentines. I guess I should be happy….

    Liked by 1 person

    1. anaghamurali says:

      Coffee is wonderful….I am an coffee addict…



    Liked by 2 people

    1. anaghamurali says:

      Thank u dear..wish u too the same.


  16. oilyfarmgirl says:

    Love it! Happy Valentines day!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. anaghamurali says:

      Thank u…..wish u d same dear


  17. Dina says:

    So sweet! Happy Valentineโ€™s Day. โค

    Liked by 1 person

    1. anaghamurali says:

      Thank u same to u dear


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